Webinar Session 5 Wrap-up

Session 5 Wrap-Up

To everyone who attended or watched Session 5, thank you! As usual, I answer questions from the previous session in an email. I’ve decided to post the wrap-up this year as well.

Question: What if you’re not funny? (posted by Allison Merrill—thank you)

I kind of passed over this, but it’s a really valid question. Instinctively I’m a bad cook, but most nights with the effort of looking up recipes, shopping, and preparing, I have dinner on the table. Heather is a more instinct cook, more interested in cooking, and makes it seem effortless. At the end of the day, however, my dinner compares decently Heather’s and is certainly tastier than a blank table.

Humor is the same. Don’t worry about “being funny.” Worry about producing something funny. To make humor, brainstorm ideas, open-write, start with something absurd or unsafe, meander your way through an unnecessary scene, try different voices, watch funny stuff to get in the mood (as per James Duckett’s suggestion—I do that also), edit a ton, throw out what doesn’t work, ask friends to brainstorm, be silly, put yourself out there, fail, try again, all that.

On a personal note, I view play-backs of these webinars and can get physically ill watching my mistakes. If I’m too boring in one, I’m trying too hard in the next, etc. Rather than think I’m just not very good, I try to improve. I treat my humor in the same way.

Someone else may make the production of funny material seem effortless, but 1) it might be more effort than you think, and 2) who cares? You have produced something worthwhile that keeps your scene or sentence from earning a “blank” in the humor category. You and your readers win!

Question: Does humor slow or speed pacing: (posted by Jana King—thank you)

Great question!!!  James says it slows it down. I need to hit you up, James, for your take on that. The way I think of it, humor speeds pacing, but takes more actual words because it requires play-by-play “video shots” of the scene. In other words, humor reads fast, but actually takes many pages/sentences. I had to simplify the entire plot of my current manuscript, as compared to my last one, because the funny scenes take up serious room. You don’t want to make your reader drink from the plot-fire hose, nor do you want to squeeze in the funny. So a simple plot (or scene outline) is best.

On that note, James Duckett is so knowledgeable about humor, and so good at helping us answer questions live, that we really want to thank him and give a big shout to him. I wish I’d thought to put him up there with us using a Google Hangout. We will ponder on the feasibility of that for next time.

Side note about James Duckett: He’s been talking about releasing 50 Shades of Gravy—It’s SAUCY! for a year. #BeliveItWhenYouSeeIt

Hey, Michael Wright: Word play during the word play section? Niiiice.

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See you next week at Session 6.

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Let’s Do This Thing: New #50FirstChapter Webinars

Quick References:

Session 5 Handout

Session 5 YouTube link (where you watch the video)

In preparation for LDStorymakers’ annual First Chapter Contest, Heather Clark and I will host three new sessions of our first chapter webinars. Yay!! We can’t wait, mostly because we love ourselves.  The webinars are free, so don’t worry.  Obviously, we love you, too.

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And! As usual, if you 1) are signed up for our newsletter and 2) comment during the live airing of the webinar, you will be entered to win a free first chapter critique by either Heather or me.

We will not review material from previous sessions, so be sure to check out any of the first webinars that interest you.

Mark your calendars!

January 14, 8 p.m. Mountain Time, Session 5: Humor Hooks Readers

Did you know 95% of Americans think they’re funnier than the average American? Isn’t that the awesomeness stat you’ve ever seen? The reality is it’s true, from a certain point of view.  Come help your characters and voice achieve the great 95% and hook your readers along the way.

The way to access the session is to click the link above or right here.  On January 14, the video will go live. After we are done, the video will be available for viewing at any time. Note that you have to be present live to be entered to win the free critique.

January 21, 8 p.m. Mountain Time, Session 6: Beats and Pacing

Heather is obsessed with beats.  Really, this is a true statement. But with good reason. Nothing clinches the flow of a scene like nailing the emotional beats.  We needed a few volunteers for this and we have plenty now! Thank you so much to everyone here and on Facebook who volunteered pages for us to critique.

The link to this session will be coming soon.

January 28, 8 p.m. Mountain Time, Session 7: The Final Checklist

Are you ready to enter your first chapter to a contest, except for the heart attack you have every time you hover over the send button? We know the feeling.  What if you forgot the little things, like mentioning the main character’s age or gender?  What if you accidentally deleted the physical description of the villain during a scene switch? If you have properly edited your work, you can’t see the trees for the forest any more.  Make sure you’ve got the basics covered with a handy checklist.

The link to this session will be coming soon.

We email the handouts that accompany the sessions, so be sure to get on the newsletter list. Hope to see you!

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